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entry 1- Nguyễn Thị Tuyển


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Entry 1:- Nguyễn Thị Tuyển

v     Item 1: poem

                                           A Poison Tree

I was angry with my friend:
I told my wrath, my wrath did end.
I was angry with my foe:
I told it not, my wrath did grow.

And I watered it in fears,
Night and morning with my tears;
And I sunned it with smiles,
And with soft deceitful wiles.

And it grew both day and night,
Till it bore an apple bright.
And my foe beheld it shine.
And he knew that it was mine,

And into my garden stole
When the night had veiled the pole;
In the morning glad I see
My foe outstretched beneath the tree.

Author: William Blake

Rhetorical devices:
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           Rhyme: fears-tears; smiles-wiles; night-bright; shine-mine; stole-pole; see-tree
-         Parallelism : poison tree, an apple( wrath, angry), foe(friend), tears(fears), smiles( wiles)
-         Paradox: I told my wrath, my wrath did end.
                     I told it not, my wrath did grow.

-         Repetition: I was angry with my friend
                                  I was angry with my foe

Message: keeping silent with the wrath will kill all relationships

v Item 2: Cartoon

                  Person wearing a snail shell as a hat

Source:  http://chrismaddencartoons.wordpress.com/2012/08/31/person-wearing-a-snail-shell-as-a-hat/

Rhetorical devices:
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             Metaphor: snail shell helmet (slow thinking in brain)
-         Metonymy: snail shell(for a snail which has slow thinking or slow movement)

Message: think slowly to consider everything

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v Item 3: story

                                       Two wolves
A Cherokee elder sitting with his grandchildren told them, "In every
life there is a terrible fight - a fight between two wolves.
One is evil: he is fear, anger, envy, greed, arrogance, self-pity, resentment,
and deceit.
The other is good: joy, serenity, humility, confidence,
generosity, truth, gentleness, and compassion."
A child asked,
"Grandfather, which wolf will win?" The elder looked him in the eye.
"The one you feed."
Source: http://go.webassistant.com/wa/upload/users/u1000057/workspaces/30stories/#wolves

Rhetorical devices:
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               Metaphor:

 Evil wolf (bad character), good wolf (good character), feed wolf (build character), life fight (inside fight in a person)

-         Symbol:
Grandfather as symbol of experienced people
Child: symbol of young shoots
-         Repetition:

There is a terrible fight - a fight between two wolves
-         Climax:

o   Fear, anger, envy, greed, arrogance, self-pity, resentment,
and deceit.
o   Joy, serenity, humility, confidence,
generosity, truth, gentleness, and compassion.



Lesson: Character which affects success most depends on the way or the process a person builds it

12 nhận xét:

  1. anh em ơi comment đi. chặt chém nhiệt tình ná

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  2. item 1: you should review the parallelism and paradox. i thinks it's not correct.
    item2: in my opinion, the rhetoric is symbol that snail symbolizes slowness.
    item 3: i see that there isn't the symbol.
    cheer u!^^

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  3. Nhận xét này đã bị tác giả xóa.

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  4. hi, Tuyen. I think you did a good job. I really like all of your items. However, in item 1, I have an opinion with Huyen Trang about your parallelism and paradox.They are not correct. I think the parallelism in this poem is that the similarity in sentence’s structure in the two lines:
    “I was angry with my friend, I told my wrath, my wrath did end
    I was angry with my foe, I told it not, my wrath did grow.”
    and I reckon that these lines are not paradox as u mentioned above
    That's all my comment.
    On the whole, thanks for your meaningful items and hope u will do such a good job in the next entries.

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  5. thanks for your opinions. i will review them

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  6. i see the item 1. it's my carelessness. i mean it the metaphor

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  7. Hi Tuyen, I think you did a good job^^ I like item 1 most!!
    But I have some opinion about item 2: I think this picture show me the meaning of the snail shell:" Men hide themself from the world" they don't dare to confront themself.

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  8. hi! any way, congratulations! however, i have different opinion your message of the item 2. follow me, the message is that let's be out of the narrow mind, dare to think and show it, not elude.

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  9. Hi Tuyen,
    I also agree with comment of Huyen Trang about Item 3. In my opinion, the grandfather and the child are only the characters in this story. They don't stand for anyone or anything. I think so because we have similar story ^^

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  10. oh. thanks for your comments. i will consider them. maybe in item 3, there's not symbol here. your comments are very beneficial

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