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Entry 1
Item1:Poem
Life
is Beauty
Life is beauty, admire it.
Life is bliss, taste it.
Life is a dream, realize it.
Life is a challenge, meet it.
Life is a duty, complete it.
Life is a game, play it.
Life is a promise, fulfill it.
Life is sorrow, overcome it.
Life is a song, sing it.
Life is a struggle, accept it.
Life is a tragedy, confront it.
Life is an adventure, dare it.
Life is luck, make it.
Life is too precious, do not destroy it.
Life is life, fight for it
Life is beauty, admire it.
Life is bliss, taste it.
Life is a dream, realize it.
Life is a challenge, meet it.
Life is a duty, complete it.
Life is a game, play it.
Life is a promise, fulfill it.
Life is sorrow, overcome it.
Life is a song, sing it.
Life is a struggle, accept it.
Life is a tragedy, confront it.
Life is an adventure, dare it.
Life is luck, make it.
Life is too precious, do not destroy it.
Life is life, fight for it
*Rhetorical devices:Simile:life as
dream,challenge,game,song,….
Receptition:life is…./life is
Parallelism:life is…,…it /life is…,…it
*Message:life is very colorful,it bring us many magical
thing so we should live better to control our life and seek happiness every day
Item 2:Picture
*Rhetorical devices: Overstatement
Metaphor:Santa
clause lie on solar pannel – the earth are heating
*Message:Global warming can lead to the melting of ice in
the pole and santa claus have to live on solar panel.
Iterm 3:cartoon
*Rhetorical devices:Overstatement
Metonynym:
“mountain”of rubbish –many rubbish
*Massage : Every day rubbish increase rapidly.it makes us
suprise
in item 2 and 3, you should show clearly about the rhetorical device: overstatement. Moreover, your photos are too small for us to see.
Trả lờiXóaDear Huong,
Trả lờiXóaI agree with Nguyet that you should analyze more clearly the rhetorical devices. Moreover, i think the message of item 2 is that people have to join hands to protect the environment. The message of item 3 is that people should throw rubbish right places.
Nhận xét này đã bị tác giả xóa.
Trả lờiXóaDear my friend, your item 1 & 2 are good. however, I want to add your message in the item 3. It's that our enviroment is becoming polutted heavily by rubbish. People need to take the measures timely so as to protect it.
Trả lờiXóaI think overstatement is the mountain od rubbish.
in general, i total agree with Huyen Trang that we should joim hands to protect our environment. and i think that people shouldn't throw rubbish into environment so that we dont see a 'mountain bubbish' just like that.
Trả lờiXóain my opinion, item 1 uses metaphor is that life: beauty, bliss, dream...not simile. and repetition : not receptition. good luck!!! ^_^
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